Friday, January 22, 2016

Rhetorical Proposal: Poverty & Human Rights

Stakeholder: Opponents to the Occupy Movement
            This article is attempting to articulate that the Occupy movement was too radical.  It begins by giving a bit of a background, and then quickly switches to a more dire tone, conveying the eerie message that “Occupy Wall Street is both invisible and omnipresent”, meaning that the real force behind the movement hasn’t gone away. The author believes this is a serious issue, even going as far as to say that the “movement promoted anti-American, anti-Western, anti-capitalist revolutionary domestic change”, an extremely bold statement appealing to the pathos of conservative America.  The real crux of the article is its constant references to Obama and his sympathies with the “ideals and tactics of the extreme left”. This is another element of emotional appeal, there is nothing that modern American conservatives love to hate more than the president, and all that is required to paint a movement as negative is to show that he has sympathies for it.
The author even brings up a comparison to the Arab Spring, and mentions that it promoted “jihadist islam”. I found this assertion to be extremely interesting not only because I disagree that the Arab Spring promoted such a thing, but also because it honestly seems like it’s thrown in the middle of the article just to make a reference to Islam, another play on the fears of right wingers. I just completely disagree with everything this article to attempting to convey. Not only is it poorly written and shows a complete lack of regard for the political facts of the US at the time, the real topic of the article, that Occupy was a radical movement, is something I see as completely false. This author seems to have a fundamental misunderstanding of what it is he is condemning, and if he thinks that people asking for a higher minimum wage is an example of “anti-Capitalist revolutionary domestic change”, then he has a fundamental misunderstanding of what it is to be poor as well.

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